I was about to finish the first chapter of my book when I heard the knock the first time - mum and dad had travelled, so I was home alone. I had resigned not to answer because I did not want to be disturbed. But when I realized that it was 11:30 in the evening, it sent a cold chill down my spine. "who could be disturbing my peace at this time of the day?" I asked myself with a jot of fear.
'kpon kpon kpon' . I had lost count of the number of knocks, so I decided to reward the night crawler for their persistence. "who is that" I asked with a voice accompanied by fear. "it's me o" replied the unknown person. The voice sounded familiar, I thought to my self. "you who? " I said, with some restored nerve. "it's me oo, Aunty Ivie".
Aunty Ivie was my favourite aunty, my dad's only sister. She was light skinned and tall, with a lovely figure to go with it. She had that perfect dentition which could make her smile tickle even Hitler. Aunty was also very supportive. She would buy me books and say "you have to be the best writer, remember we are 'bini' people". One time I thought about handing her a nick name, but you know, tradition would not permit.
"No na, don't lift the bag that way. It may tear you know. Don't worry sef, I will take it to the room myself. I also have to remove the sweat that comes with the 5 hour journey from Abuja to Benin". I insisted on helping her, but her mind was already made up
7 minutes later, my phone rang - it was my mum
"sweetheart your daddy's sister passed away today, about 5hours ago"
I froze.
22 comments:
interesting.i await a sequel.
Woah!! Next please!
Nice. Please Next Episode
Jeez! Na horror movie be this one o
Thanx. You won't wait long
He's still freezing
Next story you mean? Lol
Lol... E be like
Wow! I froze too. Scary stuff. Nice one.
Bloody hell,
This is blood chilling, me like. Lovely narrative too
Thank you
Thank you
Nice one bro. The English wey you read for school no waste. I been think say e waste. Its good as you have started now to show us how much of an intense writer you could be. Keep it up
Ghen ghen...... It's a spirit sometbung
Story from the heart, so real and perfect, i pray For more inspiration that will take u to a higher hight beyond ur imagination dearie.........
I'd have said "keep it up" buh I don't like scary stuff..so I'd just say better complete what you started.. really creative and entertaining!
Lol.thank you
Lol.. I dey tell you
Lol.. I dey tell you
Amen
Nice one boss. So u sabi write like this? Impressive!!
Wonderful. Suspense filled.kudos
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